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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:26:46 GMT -5
Dr. Archer Banner. Physician. Scientist. Searching for a way to tap into the hidden strengths that all humans have. Then an accidental overdose of gamma radiation alters his body chemistry. And now, when Archer Banner grows angry or outraged, a startling metamorphosis occurs.
The creature is driven by rage, and is pursued by an investigative reporter...
Archer Banner: Mr. McGee, don't make me angry. You wouldn't like me when I'm angry.
The creature is wanted for a murder he didn't commit.
Archer Banner is believed to be dead, and he must let the world think that he is dead until he can find a way to control the raging spirit that dwells within him.
Archer walk in to town,As he was walking He see a poster sign with Lila coming to concert,While he was reading it the three girls behind him were talking.
Ashley: This is so cool! She's finally coming here!
Mel: The best part is we got a front row seat! Thankyou again Lindsay!
Lindsay: Yeah just remeber that you two own me,
Mel: Don't worry we will.Hey there's a guy standing in a way! Exscue me sir, Could you get out of our way just a bit? Thanks.
Ashley: Mel! That was not nice.We're sorry sir.
Archer: No problem. Didn't mean to be in the way.
Lindsay: You're not in the way. My name is Lindsay, and this is my sister Ashley and Mel.
Ashley and Mel: Hi.
Lindsay: What's your name?
Archer: Benson, Archer Benson.
Ashley: Nice to meet you Archy!
Mel: Ashley! That wasn't a nice thing to call a stranger.
Lindsay: So have you ever met Lila before?
Archer: No I haven't,But I would like to.
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:28:51 GMT -5
Archer talk to the girls then he left.He went to look for a place to stay at a old beat up hotal.After he was in his room, He was working on a cure for himself.
Archer: I am now trying to find a way to kill all the gamma cell that are in my blood cell. Every time I change the creature gets more stronger then ever! I can never try to control it, even if I wanted to. I try everything and still it won't work! My biggest fear is when the creature get out of control,He could hurt somebody and I can't allow that to happen! It's hopeless.
Then Archer hear a knock at his door. He walk to the door and see Lindsay, Ashley and Mel standing there, He let them in.
Archer: So can I help you girls with somthing?
Mel: Well we were following you and you know this isn't a great place to stay.
Ashley: Why don't you stay with us, We have a guest room that you can stay in.
Lindsay: Yeah and you can-----What are you working on?!
Ashley and Mel: Lindsay!!!
Archer: LOL!!!Thanks girls,But I'll be find. And I'm Doctor working on a cure for me.
Mel: What problem do you have?
Archer: Well it's a disease that takes control over me.
Lindsay: Sorry to hear that.
Ashley: So you won't be staying with us huh?
Archer: Sorry I'll have to turn that down.
Mel: Maybe you can come to Lila McCann concert with us!
Archer: Sure,I would like that.Thankyou.
Lindsay: Great! We'll see you there tomorrow!
Then they left Archer. And Archer went back to his study for a cure.
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:30:34 GMT -5
The next Morning Archer was getting ready for Lila Concert, He try to look like a cowboy and he did. That Evening Archer met up with the three girls he meet yesterday.
Archer: Hi girls! How are y'all doing?
Lindsay: You're going to need a little more work on the cowboy talk Archy!
Archer: Yes ma'am!
Ashley and Mel were laughing at both of them!
Ashley: I guess we better go grab our seat. I want to take a good picture of Lila!
Mel: We got plenty of time Ash, theres no, no[Mel is taking a deep breath]
Lindsay: Mel are you ok?
Mel: I'm fine.
Archer: There's a seat over there if you want to sit.
Mel: ok.
Archer took Mel over to sit down. He was feeling a bit concern.
Archer: Are you sure you feeling ok? Do you need to see a doctor?
Mel: I said I'm fine. I just have a heart problem. I'll be ok.
Archer: What kind of-------
Then Archer was being interuped by three Bullys, They started to pick on Archer and Mel,
Bully1: Hey man you think he's bothering this girl?
Bully2: Yeah Maybe she should come with us.
Bully3: HAHAHAHA!!! Yeah!
Lindsay: HEY!!!LEAVE MY SISTER ALONE!!!
Ashley: I'll call the police if you get near her!
Bully1: Oh really?!
Then the bully pick up Archer and Grab him by the shirt!
Bully1: Any last word before I trash you around?
Archer: Please don't do this,You don't know what you're doing. Please don't make me angry, You wouldn't like me when I'm angry!
Bully1: Oh yeah I do want to! Let's trash him!!!
Lindsay: ASHLEY CALL THE POLICE!!!
Ashley: Ok!
Then the Bully punch Archer in the stomach And threw him to the ground and started kicking him.Then Archer eyes turn white And he stared to turn green as his shirt rip.He was changing into the Hulk!!!
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:32:10 GMT -5
The three Bully was walking toward Mel, then Lindsay step in front of her to protect her.
Lindsay: I'm warning you! Leave her alone!
Bully2: What about the girl who's calling the police? We got to stop her!
Bully1: Forget about her!Hey what's that growling?
Bully3: Um guys! I wouldn't turn around if I were you!
Everybody turn around and see that the Hulk was behind them!
Hulk: ROOOAAARR!!!! GRRRRRRRR!!!!!
Bully1: GET HIM!
Bully3: No way you get him!
Bully2: HE'S COMING!!!!
Bully1: Fine I'll get him!
Bully1 ran toward at the Hulk,He pulled out a knife to stab the Hulk, But the Hulk grab him by his shirt and threw him in the air.Then the bullys try to escape but the Hulk grab them from behind and toss them to the Door way entrance to the concert.Then the Hulk see Lindsay and Mel. He walk towards them.
Lindsay: Stay away from us you freak!
Mel: Where's Archy? What did they do to him?
Ashley: Hey guys the police is--[scream!] Who or what is that?!
Hulk looked confuse,Then he hears the police siren,Then he ran off!
Lindsay: Hey wait! Ashley stay with Mel,I'm going to follow him!
Ashley: Since when do you give me orders?
Lindsay: Because I'm the oldest so there!
Mel: She got a point there.
Ashley: Oh be quiet!!!
Then Lindsay follow the Hulk,Soon she found him resting and turning back to Archer.Lindsay was shock to see that Archer was the Hulk.
Lindsay: Archy what happen to you?
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:33:51 GMT -5
Archer: It's a long story, Was anyone hurt?
Lindsay: Just the Bullys. Which they deserve it. Your green creature saved our lives.
Archer: And how is Mel doing after all this?
Lindsay: She's fine. She is ok now.
Archer: How often dose she goes see the doctor.
Lindsay: That's none of your bussiness.
Archer: I'm also a doctor, please let me help.
Lindsay: And you're also a monster!Fine! Her own Doctor said to see him once a year. He acted like he doesn't care!I call him every time Mel is having trouble breathing,Ashley and I would try to calm her and help her breath normal. Some time it helps and sometime it dosen't.You said that you're a doctor, Can you help her, please?
Archer: I'll see what I can do. What was the doctor name?
Lindsay: Dr. Jack Lincoln. He was suppose to help her and now I don't trust him at all.
Archer: Don't worry Lindsay, I'll see to it that Mel gets all the help she needs! Tomorrow I'll pay Dr. Lincoln a visit.
Ashley: I'll go with you.
Lindsay: Ashley I though I told you---
Ashley: -----You're not the boss of me! So Archy You will help Mel will you? Please don't fail her.
Archer: You have my word. I will not let her down. And that's a promise.
Mel: Thanks Archy.
Archer: Your welcome.
That night in the office of Dr. Lincoln, Dr. Lincoln was going over some stuff.Then a lady walk into his office.
Lady: Sir? don't forget your appointment tommorrow.
Lincoln: Who is it?
Lady: It's Archer Banner. He wants to come in tomorrow and talk about your patient Mel Sohal,He said it was a urgent.
Lincoln: Banner? I thought he was dead! And wht dose he want to talk about Mel? I told them not to see me in a year!
Lady: Should I call him back and say no to him?
Lincoln: No.I think this will be a very intresting apointment. Banner will be walking into my trap when he come! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
To Be Continued........................
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:35:49 GMT -5
The Incredible Hulk part two.
At the doctor clinic Dr. Lincoln set up a private meeting with six of his men,They are planing to get rid of Archer and anyone that come with him.They sat in a small dark room Talking about what they should do.
Lincoln: Listen up boys! we are about to have the uninvited guest here. Name Archer Banner. I don't know what he want, but it seem like he want me to help this patience of my. Her Name Is Mel. I want you boys to see that she dosen't get help by this banner guy. Run him off the road or shoot him I don't care! But let him came to me first,I want to see the man face before you kill him.
Man1: But what about the girl? What's your plan for her?
Lincoln: I will give her a poison shot.HAHAHAHA!! Any question?
Man2: Um dose she have any brother or Sister? If so what's your plan for them?
Lincoln: Let's just hope they don't get to involed! Besidee she only have two Sisters. You all know what to do.NOW GO!!!
Later Archer visit the Sohal sisters house. He was doing a normal Check up on Mel,He was feeling her forehead, and it was getting a bit hot.Her blood preasure was getting high. Archer was getting a bit worry.
Archer: Were do you keep all your medince?
Mel: In the Kitchen drawer. I'm feeling a bit tired. I need some thing to keep me a wake.
Archer: Well I'll have to say no to coffee---
Ashley:--WHAT?!
Archer: Not you! How about a king size Hershey bar?
Mel: Great! You know I love chocolate so much!
Archer: Hopefully that will help.
Lindsay: Hey Archy when will you see Dr. Lincoln?
Archer: In a few minutes. Lindsay did he ever give you any Medical record of Mel Heart problem?
Lindsay: Nope. Weird part is when she went for the check up he never writes anything down.
Ashley: Yeah most doctor would! But not him.
Archer: Has he ever done a surgrey on you Mel?
Mel: No.
Archer: Good. I'm looking at your Medince,You're taking a wrong pills. How long have you been taking them?
Mel: I don't know. four to six month.Why?
Archer: He's killing you with these lousey Medicne!
Everyone: WHAT?!
Ashley: WHY?! He's a doctor,Doctor are suppose to help people! What did Mel ever do to him?!
Lindsay: I'm going with you Archy and give him a pieice of my mind!
Ashley: Me too!
Archer: Look I don't know if you should come.I need you to find a right Doctor for Mel.
Lindsay: NO ARCHY!!! We are coming with you now!
Mel: I listen to her if I were you.
Archer: Ok,Let's go.
Soon they reach the Clinic. Dr.Lincoln Men were guarding around the building.
Man4: Hey Boss they're here. And he brought the whole gang with him.
Lincoln: Good.I'll be ready for him!
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:37:39 GMT -5
Archer and the girls walk into the waiting room,Lindsay walked up to the window first.
Lady: May I help you?
Lindsay: Yes we're here to see Dr. Jack Lincoln! And he better be here!
Lady: are you threating me?
Lindsay: I don't know. Am I?
Lady: Name?
Lindsay: Tell the Doctor that Mel would like to see him!
Ashley: Ok Lindsay relax. She's just doing her job.
Lady: Ok it'll be just a minute.
Archer: We would like to see him now! A girl's life is in danger, She needs help.
Lady: well go to the hospital! I'm sure they would help.
Archer: We will as soon as the doctor tell us what he did to her! I need to know everything he did!
Lincoln: [On a speaker] It's alright.Show them to my office.
Lady: The Doctor will see you now.
Ashley: Remember Lindsay, As soon we see him, please don't lose your temper. Let's hear what he have to say first.
Later in Dr. Lincoln Room, He see Archer and the girls walk in.
Lincoln: Hello Mel, long time no see.
Mel: What did you do to me?
Lincoln: I'm helping you to get better.
Lindsay: BY TRYING TO KILL HER?! WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!
Ashley: Easy Lindsay.Let Archy talk to him.
Lincoln: Banner? Archer Banner. I thought you were killed in that fire. Guess I was wrong.
Archer: Why?
Lincoln: Why what?
Archer: Just drop the act Jack. You know as a Doctor you are suppose to help people get better! Not killing them. Did you kill some people in the past? I was reading up on you, 12 of your Patince died! They died of Heart, Lung, Liver and Kidney problem because you refuse to help them. Thay trusted you! You are nothing but a sick man! You don't deserve to be a doctor!
Lincoln: How dare you come to my office to insult me!
Ashley: Oh we dare! And we just did! Have you ever think about family Dr. Lincoln? Because if you don't you are nothing but a monster!
Lindsay: You said it Ashley! That girl is our sister and she will get help Doctor wether you like it or not.
Lincoln: Oh how touching!
[Archer grab Dr. Lincoln by the collar and pin him to the wall. He was getting angry!]
Archer: Now you listen to me and Listen good! That 15 year old girl is getting sick because of you! And 12 people are dead because of you! I want everything you got on Mel and I'm going to take her to the hospital were she'll be treated. And I need that information to save her live! So what will it be, the easy way, or the hard way?
Lincoln: The hard way!BOYS!!!
[ Then six men ran into the room with gun point! Archer put Dr. Lincoln on the ground.]
Lincoln: Hehehehehe!!! I guess it'll be the hard way. Boys take Archer Banner and Mel's two sister with you. I'll keep Mel in here so I can treat her!
Archer: Please, Just leave them alone. Just let the three of the girls go.Take me instead.
Lincoln: What is it with guys like you always want to keep the girls out of harms way?
Ashley: What is it with the badguys who always take girls hostage?
Lincoln: get them out of here! Take Archer and the girls to the basement, And put Archer in the eleric chair!
Archer: And what's your plan for Mel? If you kill her, you're next!
Lincoln: Must we talk violents? Please, I'm a Doctor not a killer! Take them away!!!
The men took Archer, Lindsay and Ashley down to the basement, While Dr. Lincoln is talking to Mel!
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:40:37 GMT -5
Lincoln: Well Mel, It looks like just you and me. Your friend Archer is not a very smart man is he? Well I got news for you, Archer is a loser! He's using you and your sisters! He just lower all three of you into my trap! Archer is the Badguy not me.
Mel: You're wrong! You're the one is the badguy! You're holding my two sister hostage! Archer didn't! He's trying to help me to get better!
Lincoln: That's exactly what he wants you to believe. I mean how long have you known this guy? Hmm?
Mel: Three days and counting.
Lincoln: Well let's began your check up.
Mel: What are you going to do to me? Kill me like those 12 people? Why not help them! They ask for your help and yet you turn away from them! I TRUSTED YOU!!
Lincoln: You are starting to give me a headace! Now hold still this will hurt just a bit!
[Lincoln pick up a big shot needle and walked toward Mel, Mel quickly got up from her seat and move away as fast as she could. She went to the door and find it lock! Dr. Lincoln was right behind her.She quickly turn around to punch him in the face hard! Lincoln drop the shot needle and it break apart.She then Pick up the the chair and hit him over his head! Then she unlocked the door and ran out of the room.As she was runing, she was feeling the pain and started to have problem breathing. Two men saw her and grab her by the arm! Then Dr. Lincoln came.]
Lincoln: Take her to the surgrey room! If she needs help, I'll help her by ending her pain to death!
Mel: NO!!! LET ME GO!!!
Lincoln: Don't worry Mel, You're in a VERY good hands! Take her!
[ Later in the Basement Archer was strap into the electric chair, Lindsay and Ashley were both tied to the pole.]
Archer: Listen to me, Mel's life is in danger! I have to help her!
Men5: Ah Shut up!!! You ain't going nowhere! After you're dead,those to girls are next!
Ashley: Hey! You can't be serious?! All we wanted to do was to help Mel!
Lindsay: Yeah! you tell them Ash!
Ashley: Stop agreeing with me!
Lindsay: I am not!
Ashley: Are too!
Lindsay: Am not!
Ashley: Are too!
Man5: STOP FIGHTING!!! You're giving me a headace!!!
Ashley: Ahhhhh, poor mister guard man, I feel so sorry for you, NOT!!!
Lindsay: Oh and we were not fighting. We were talking! It's a sister talk so next time butt out! and you won't hear us.
Man5: You girls are nuts!
Lindsay and Ashley: Thankyou!
Man5: Ok turn on the electric chair! Let's not waste anymore time!
Man6: Right. Let's do it! And may God have mercy on your soul Jerk!
Archer: NO WAIT DON'T----AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Ashley and Lindsay: ARCHY!!!
[ Then Archer felt a load full of shock! As Linsay and Ashley watch in horror, Archer eye's tun white! His shirt began to rip and he was turning green! The Hulk broke free of the strap!]
Lindsay: Boy I never though I'd be glad to see him!!
Ashley: GO GREEN MAN!!!
Man5: what the heck is that?!
Man6: Let's get him! On second thought, HEY see those two girls there? They want to hurt you!
Ashley: Do not!!! I liked him the first time I saw him!
Lindsay: Riiiiiiiiiiiiight Ash, Whatever!
[The Hulk turn to see Lindsay and Ashley,He broke them free. Then he turn to the two men and started to wreck the place! He pick up the electric chair and threw it at the two men! One of the men pick up a gun to shoot him but the Hulk grab the the gun and bend it like cardboard!!!Then he gra the guy shirt and toss him a cross the basement!]
Lindsay: Good, now let's go rescue Mel!
Ashley: Hey Green man you have to help Mel! Please Help her!
[Then the Hulk smashes through the wall to rescue Mel!]
Ashley: The least he could do was use the door!
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 20:43:06 GMT -5
In the Surgrey Room Mel was strap to the table and Dr. Lincoln had four of his men to guard the door. Mel try to escape but she couldn't.She was getting tears in her eyes.
Lincoln: What's a matter Mel? You will be just fine.
Mel: Please don't do this. I want to live.
Lincoln: Yes, But I think it's time to go. Look at it this way, You'll feel no pain.Hehehehehehehehe. Now let's began.
Mel: You're so evil! I mean why would you want to hurt a young girl like me?
Lincoln: I'm not evil, I want to help you from suffering. People don't deserve to suffer!
Mel: But they also have a right to live! So you have no right to take my life away without my permisson! So unstrap me and we can forget this ever happen!!!
Lincoln: Like I'm going to fall for that! Now SHUT-UP!!!
[ Dr. Lincoln grab the Oxgen mask and was about to put the mask on her! But she kept turning her head making the doctor more angry.Then he hold her head still, then suddly the Hulk smashes through the Wall!!! Dr. Lincoln moved away from Mel slowly and pick up a knife and throw it at the Hulk! But he miss! Hulk walk up to Doctor Lincoln and grab him by the shirt and puch him hard! knocking him out cold!Then he see Mel on the operating table,He broke the strap off of her, then he Pick her up and carry her out of the room.Then Ashley and Lindsay walk up to him.]
Ashley: Mel Are you ok?
Mel: I think so. Thanks to this green guy.
Lindsay: I found Mel's Medical record! Let's take her to the Hospital now!
[Hulk follow Lindsay and Ashley to the car while he still carry Mel. Then he started to change back to Archer. Without wasting anytime they rush over to the Hospital]
Archer: I'm a doctor and this girl needs help really fast!
Nurse: Ok follow me, How many people do you need in the surgrey room?
Archer: About five. Ok guys say good bye to Mel.
Ashley: Good luck Mel!
Lindsay: You're now in good hands.
Mel: Bye guys, See you later!
Ashley: Take good care of her Archy.
Archer: I will.
[Then Archer took Mel to the Surgrey room, He work on her heart for 3 hours. Lindsay and Ashley were in the waiting room, praying and hopeing that Mel will get through this.One hour Later Archer walk into the waiting room.]
Lindsay: Archy how's Mel doing?
Archer: She's fine. She will no longer have a Heart problem. She will now do what other 15 year old girl will do!
Ashley: When do we get to see see her?
Archer: Now if you like.
[Lindsay and Ashley went to see Mel. Mel woke up and smile at her sisters. They all hug in tears.Knowing that Mel will be ok. A week Later Archer started to pack and was ready to leave.Then the girl pay him a visit.]
Archer: Hello girls! What can I do for you?
Mel: I came over to say,Thankyou for saving my life.
Lindsay: We'll always be greatful for what you did.
Archer: No problem. I was glad to help.
Ashley: Were will you go?
Archer: I'm not sure yet. Mostly to look for a cure on myself.
Mel: Will we ever see you again?
Lindsay: Please come again when ever you're a round.
Archer: I will. I promise.
[Then they all hug Archer and said goodbye to him.]
Mel: It's so sad.
Ashley: What is?
Mel: All this time he's looking for a cure and can't find anything.
Lindsay: At least he came to help us. We will never forget his kindness.
[ Archer is walking on a freeway and still looking for a cure. Who knows what lies ahead for him.]
The End.
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Post by Robyn on Nov 6, 2003 22:54:29 GMT -5
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Post by Archer on Nov 6, 2003 23:23:29 GMT -5
:DThankyou Robyn! It's great to be back!LOL!!!
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Post by Jakazul on Nov 10, 2003 10:11:03 GMT -5
ARCHER! You came back! With a cool story! Life is good. ARCHER! I talked to you while you were gone! I've read cool story! Life is good anyway.
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Post by Robyn on Nov 10, 2003 16:51:03 GMT -5
*stares at Jake weird* *Buzz Lightyear voice* You're mocking me, aren't you?
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Post by The Chris on Nov 10, 2003 16:54:30 GMT -5
-Don't take my word for it, but I think he is.
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